There is some nice choral work and interesting choices of changes of voice.
Unfortunately, the sound quality is very distracting and makes some of your work difficult to hear properly. Your group have also been constricted by the rhythm of the lines, rather than using the punctuation and imagery guide the rhythm of your speech.
This is a good attempt with room for improvement in the future.
There is some nice choral work and interesting choices of changes of voice.
ResponderBorrarUnfortunately, the sound quality is very distracting and makes some of your work difficult to hear properly. Your group have also been constricted by the rhythm of the lines, rather than using the punctuation and imagery guide the rhythm of your speech.
This is a good attempt with room for improvement in the future.